I have received some feedback to improve each of the pages.
For the first two pages, I will change the colour to red and add white boxes to make the text stand out more. I'm also going to put on a bit less information as I want the first pages to be captivated by her name and image.
For the third and fourth pages, I will change the background to white, put in the legs of the main image and put in the years above both pictures to make it clearer to the reader.
The final page is a bit dry, I will add some more information and try tomake this page a little bit less conventional.
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